Crows MS series

[CrowLeaf]

[Alex]

I kinda liked the story line at the beginning but once I saw the animations it really dissapointed me. The walking moves are strange (every time an character starts walking he's doing a moonwalk?) and your fighting scenes aren't really that exciting. You also might want to use some more sound effects and more songs in 1 episode.

[CrowLeaf]

Im Very sorry this was my first time animating i will do better in the future
ty for ur opinoin

p.s if u have any idea reagarding my animating, plot, charaters, or anything plz rply

also i figured out wat was causing my "moon walk" problem i will do my best to fix it

[MushBear]

Nice storyline,

That song just annoys me, though. My sister is always singing it to piss me off. Other than that, seems like you put a lot of effort into this. Good job.

Best regards,
MushBear ♪

[CrowLeaf]

srry that ur sisters singing that song but i love all the songs in my vids

[That-Guy]

Well, I hope I don't come off as a rude, I just want to offer some constructive criticism. I apologize, if I do. Anyway;


The beginning conversation is pretty weird. It's pretty much like; "Hey, go kidnap someone who has the power to destroy/save the world! You get paid two-hundred dollars now, and eight-hundred upon completion!" His reply; "Oh, that's not strange at all! Sure thing...!"

Firstly, make his reaction a bit more realistic. I mean, honestly, he's not even a little curious or doubtful, and that kind of message is pretty hardcore. And, to win the heart of a seemingly beautiful girl whom can either destroy or save the world....he gets paid one thousand dollars in total? That's just absurd.

Also, the walking animation is slow as f#$ck. I mean, okay, he can't run and have it be called walking, but it takes him an hour to get from one spot to another.

Also, this is just a personal preference, but I don't like the music much. Not to mention that when he is walking outside of the house, the music gets louder. Doesn't that, I don't know- wild guess here, ruin the whole introspective/contemplating aspect? Or, that's what it seemed like he was doing.

...Why...is he sleeping on a windowsill?

[CrowLeaf]

im not offended @ all like i said be4 i will fix everything i plan on re-doing alll the videos

thank u for ur opinin im glad u commented cuz now i know what i have 2 fix

p.s he is sleeping on the window sill cuz there was not another bed if u dont like o well

[MushBear]

im not offended @ all like i said be4 i will fix everything i plan on re-doing alll the videos

thank u for ur opinin im glad u commented cuz now i know what i have 2 fix

p.s he is sleeping on the window sill cuz there was not another bed if u dont like o well

Then make him sleep on a bench, that would show more of his poor-ness.

[CrowLeaf]

lol

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